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EVENTS - Review Jasnah returns from Shadesmar file before final due date

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https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/es-ES/events/jasnah-returns-from-shadesmar.md

review Jufwu's notes and changes over the file and translate accordingly before the final publication.

jofwu commented

I made NO CHANGES to jasnah-returns-from-shadesmar. (https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/blob/master/translations/en/events/jasnah-returns-from-shadesmar.md)

For jasnah-arrives (https://github.com/Palanaeum/roshar-map/edit/master/translations/en/events/jasnah-arrives.md) I changed it to the following:

`# Jasnah arrives in Urithiru
Believed dead after the shipwreck off the coasts of the Frostlands, Jasnah shocked everyone with her sudden arrival in Urithiru.

Details

After returning to to the Physical Realm, Jasnah travelled for a time with Wit before arriving alone at the Shattered Plains. With no means to contact her family upon her return and assassins presumably still interested in her demise, Jasnah chose to maintain her anonymitiy until her safe arrival in Urithiru.`

How does that sound? I would have liked to write more in the details, but I couldn't think of anything else to add. :)

Done!!!!