Issues with Section 8
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664306x commented
- It needs to be proof-read (many sentences are awkward).
- All assumed knowledge (beyond what is stated in the target audience) needs to be linked back to the relevant section in the guide.
- The guide is very specific to esp8266_12. Either make it generic (for example using led and cables, not the leds on the eval board) or clearly state that it only applies to esp8266_12.
- if the guide assumes the esp8266 is running nodeMCU firmware, at the start state that.
- outcomes should be the first thing under the title.
- define the wifi modes. You state the three modes and how to set them, but not what they actually mean.
edwinwongcm commented
- Need to discuss which sentences are awkward
- Fixed
- Not done
- Fixed
- Fixed
- Was already included but need to show to confirm