DOI-USGS/climate-fish-habitat

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  • Change second bullet in walleye/bass trends section to:
    Anglers target both walleye and largemouth bass in Wisconsin lakes, but walleye are often preferred and are important to Wisconsin’s economy and culture.
  • Change helper text on you draw it figure (including deleting the last two example lines) :
    Walleye are most likely to reproduce in cooler lakes. Bass are more likely to reach high abundance in warmer lakes so their line looks like this: . It's up to you to figure out what happens to walleye in warmer lakes.
  • Change 3rd bullet after you draw it figure
    These relationships are averages. Other lake characteristics influence the suitability of the lake for each species. For example, walleye are likely to reproduce successfully in large lakes even when they are warm.
  • Change 3rd bullet in "lakes have gotten warmer.. " section:
    Differences in water temperature affect the suitability of a lake for supporting different fish species.
  • Caption for air temperature projection figure
    Global average air temperatures predicted under two emission scenarios, A2 and B1. The A2 (greater greenhouse gas emissions) was used for modeling future lake habitat for this project. Variability among Global Climate Models for each scenario is shown as a band around the line.
  • Add correct release date and web link for paper.
  • Add link for data. that was already in there..?

@gjahansen2 did I miss your original text changes or are these new ones?

it was probably something I did wrong or didn't catch before. I don't have
time to check my earlier text edits. Sorry if this is my fault and no
worries if you cant make these changes.

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@gjahansen2 https://github.com/gjahansen2 did I miss your original text
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@gjahansen2 assuming this third bullet is this one?
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No, the previous section (lakes have gotten warmer)
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the "suitability of a lake's habitat.." read awkwardly to me