EcoClimLab/vertical-thermal-review

merge/ rearrange first two paragraphs of leaf traits section

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@NidhiVinod , I feel like the first 2 paragraphs of the leaf traits section have substantial overlap and should be rearranged into 1-2 new paragraphs. I don't want to tackle that now, though, as I don't feel that I understand some aspects enough.

For example, you talk about ontogeny in both paragraphs, and it would make sense to combine that content, but I'm not familiar with that literature.

I took a stab at this. @NidhiVinod , please review carefully.

@teixeirak, I read through the paragraph and it looks great!

Great!