Some improvements for presentation
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PhuongPhg commented
- Demo as fast as robbery -> Change speed
- Emphasize on what tto manage (What data is that? Tracking what?) -> Pay attention on problems
- Split motivation and objective
- Split objective to general and detail
- General: Manage, help doctor better
- Detail: the original motivation
- UC: split smaller (into 3)
- System architecture:
- Make clear about server-side and client-side (ReactJS not React :))
- Overall figure in both sides
- Show figma example
- Add conclusion
- More text on "Future" slide
- Q&A: What make it different with the old system
chalalala commented
I'm thinking of removing Figma from the presentation as due to Dr Son, if we include it in the Client-side part, then it must appear somewhere in the System Architecture as well, then we will have to redraw the figure.