General examples male/female uses

[ShirRaj]

In all of the examples, you talk about men. The one time you mention a woman, the man is doing the actual work.
This creates an effect that women doesn't belong to this place, I'll explain more in person.

[yammesicka]

You are right, and it can be improved.

Can you take the lead on this one? :)

[ShirRaj]

Sure, no problem :)
do you want me to edit the existing notes or just review the next ones?

[yammesicka]

Pick the one you think is better :)

[ScDor]

See DabruEleynu and Tamar Eylam Gindin's post on gender-neutral writing in Hebrew