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Unity Docs review -What's-new-0.6.x.md

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Regarding the following line in whats-new-0.6.x.md

[The Unity Toon Shader became an experimental package. So the package is installable via Package Manager . Please refer to installation.md.]()

There are the following issues:

  • Passive voice (is installable)
  • Past tense (became)
  • Use of latin terms (via)

To fix these issues, I suggest the following:

From Version 0.6.x the Unity Toon Shader is an experimental package. To install it, use the Package Manager and follow the instrctions in Installation.