Unity Docs review -What's-new-0.6.x.md
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Vic-Cooper commented
Regarding the following line in whats-new-0.6.x.md
[The Unity Toon Shader became an experimental package. So the package is installable via Package Manager . Please refer to installation.md.]()
There are the following issues:
- Passive voice (is installable)
- Past tense (became)
- Use of latin terms (via)
To fix these issues, I suggest the following:
From Version 0.6.x the Unity Toon Shader is an experimental package. To install it, use the Package Manager and follow the instrctions in Installation.