alphagov/verify-local-patterns

Vehicle ownership doc upload - copy

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EUzkuraityte commented

Lizzie's comments

  1. Remove 'Upload' from page title.
  2. Intro sentence suggested rewrite
    "To prove ownership upload one of these:"
  3. Why is the copy in bold included? This repeats the information above.
EUzkuraityte commented

tagging @joanneSouthern to this

joanneSouthern commented

done in test

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EUzkuraityte commented

Sounds great, if you could let em know once that's done on this form (https://form.northumberland.gov.uk/form/launch/parking_permit) too, that'd be great!