"2D Output" critiques

[mara-kr]

Things to add

• Maybe add specific examples about products that use CRT
• Add more about how to achieve better designs in specific topic
• Add a picture/timeline/visualization about how visual technologies relate to each other
• Connection between screen technologies and rest of the chapter could be more clear, maybe connect back to what possibilities are enabled by different technologies.
• Glossary of explanations or links to explanations for technical terms (diodes, etc.)

Typos

• At the beginning of the chapter, it writes: “But display hardware alone were” and "were" should be "was."

• "While displays themselves can enable new interfaces, the content on displays is just as if not more important" This is a weird sentence, maybe you need a comma in there.

• "This required answering questions about how take ideas optimized for ink and paper and..." should be "how to take" ?

• "Data transformation often requires interaction in order to “wrangle” data into a structure suitable for visualization (10 (Links to an external site.). " there's a random open parenthesis here