Gibberish syntax corruption

[cernael]

In en/h3-altsvc.md:

"The information given in such an Alt-svc response has an expiry timer making clients will information that for a period of time so that subsequent connections and requests can go directly to the alternative host using the suggested alternative protocol."

I honestly don't understand what you're trying to say here. I'm fairly sure that the issue resides somewhere in the "...making clients will information that for a period of time..." substring, but apart from that I'm at a loss.

[bagder]

Agreed. How about this rewrite?

"The information given in such an Alt-svc response has an expiry timer, making
clients able to direct subsequent connections and requests directly to the
alternative host using the suggested alternative protocol, for a certain
period of time."

[cernael]

Much better.

[bagder]

Cool, thanks!