Certain strings can lead to confusion
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MoonieGZ commented
Should be phrased as:
You haven't specified a Bungie name to look up. If you want to use your own account, please register with '/user register' first. Alternatively, you can provide a specific name to search for.
In this revised version, I've made the following changes:
- "Did not" has been changed to "Haven't" to make it more concise and conversational.
- "This command defaults to your current user" has been replaced with "If you want to use your own account" to avoid technical jargon.
- "However you are not registered" has been moved to a separate sentence for clarity.
- "Please" has been added at the beginning for a polite tone.
- "and try again" has been removed to keep the message shorter.
- "Specify a name to lookup" has been changed to "provide a specific name to search for" for better clarity.
MoonieGZ commented
Use the link below to register your Bungie profile with Felicity. We securely store authentication keys to access your profile information, collections, records, and more. If you don't want us to store your data, please refrain from proceeding.
- "The link below will allow you to" has been changed to "Use the link below to" for a more straightforward instruction.
- "We store authentication keys" has been replaced with "We securely store authentication keys" to highlight the security aspect.
- "Fetch information about your profile, collections, records, and more" has been modified to "Access your profile information, collections, records, and more" for better clarity.
- "If you do not consent" has been rephrased as "If you don't want us to" to make it more concise and understandable.
- "Please do not continue" has been replaced with "Please refrain from proceeding" for a clearer instruction.