Update article with current revisions

[gandhiano]

The last revisions between the editorial team and myself took place over non-web documents (LibreOffice). As such, the source here is no longer up-to-date.

I did not add these revision documents to this repo due to the risk of disclosure of private information (Word metadata, etc.), but ideally they should be added as well after scrapping the metadata.

[gandhiano]

This was done for the last revisions.