Donald Eastlake SECDIR "Nits"

[vixie]

Nits

R1: 'without "Fragment' -> 'without a "Fragment'

R2: "OS" is used only once here in the explanation after the recommendation. Just spell it out.

R4: "in path MTU size" -> "in the path MTU size"

Section 4: The first two recommendations do not end with a period although all other recommendations do end with a period.

Section 5: I would add something right after the Section 5 header like "Some authoritative servers deviate from the DNS standard as follows:" and then make the current first two sentences in Section 5 indented and/or numbered or otherwise clearly a list.

[paulwouters]

added to my proposed PR