nette/docs

English tweaks on Latte homepage

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finwe commented

A few remarks about english Latte homepage. Original texts are in italics, correction proposals in bold italics

  • correct spelling is truly instead of trully in the main claim
  • definite article in Call the Security should be omitted, correct is: Call Security
  • mixing tenses in We have been developing Latte for over 10 years- and counting!
  • unsure what Over 10 Years heading should mean - missing an adjective or a verb.
  • maybe an oxford comma in highly mature, stable, and widely used
  • You don’t have to worry about how to write in Latte.
    • Better: worry about writing
  • You just stick to what you are already know.
    • are is redundant here
  • In The compiled PHP code is clear and easy, definite article should be omitted.
  • It is exactly the same like PHP syntax
    • well, it isn't, exactly.
  • Latte does not lack any important feature.
    • Lack usually pairs with uncountables or plurals.
    • Maybe better: There are no important features missing in Latte

Generally, the translation is clumsy and too close to the Czech original, too "czenglish" in parts. Maybe a more thorough review or a rewrite would be in order, correcting individual sentences is maybe a waste of time.

f3l1x commented

Could you please @finwe create a PR for these changes? 🌮

finwe commented

I would but there is no place to change this. Home pages are not (or were not at the time of creating this issue) in the repository (or at least no one could point me to them when I asked)

dg commented

I will fix it in web site code.

dg commented

Fixed, thanks