Section 4.4 (comment 5)
LPardue opened this issue · 1 comments
Section 4.4: We found these sentences in the third paragraph difficult to parse because of the number of noun modifiers.
Current:
The size and rate of transport flow control credit updates can affect
performance....
Some implementations might have independent transport-layer and
application-layer receive buffers...
However, a common flow control implementation technique is to extend
credit...
Perhaps (splitting apart the descriptions):
The size and rate of updates to flow control credit can affect
performance.... .
Some implementations might have independent receive buffers at the
transport layer and application layer....
However, a common implementation technique is to extend flow control
credit...
Each of the suggested edits in "perhaps" is good, IMO.