Section 16 (comment 13)

[LPardue]

Section 16: Does the following rewording improve the readability of the sentence?

Current:
This document has no actions for IANA; however, note that Section 8
recommends that application bindings to QUIC for applications using
TCP register UDP ports analogous to their existing TCP registrations.

Perhaps:
This document has no actions for IANA; however, note that Section 8
recommends that an application that has already registered a TCP port
but wants to specify QUIC as a transport should register a UDP port
analogous to their existing TCP registration.

[britram]

Yes, this edit is good.

[mirjak]

PR merged