quicwg/ops-drafts

Section 2.1 (comment 6)

LPardue opened this issue · 2 comments

LPardue commented

Section 2.1: "Of" is present in this sentence three times, which may affect comprehension for some readers. How may we update this sentence for easy comprehension while maintaining technical accuracy?

Original:

      The second-most-significant bit of the first octet of
      most QUIC packets of the current version is set to 1, enabling
      endpoints to demultiplex with other UDP-encapsulated protocols.

Perhaps:
In version 1 of QUIC, most QUIC packets have the
second-most-significant bit of the first octet set to 1, enabling
endpoints to demultiplex with other UDP-encapsulated protocols.

mirjak commented

Actually maybe we can be more concrete here:

In version 1 of QUIC, the second-most-significant bit of the first octet set to 1,
unless the packet is a Version Negotiation packet or
an extension is used that modifies the usage of this bit. If the bit is set to 1, it enables
endpoints to easily demultiplex with other UDP-encapsulated protocols.

britram commented

Minor edit (missing "is"):

In version 1 of QUIC, the second-most-significant bit of the first octet is set to 1,
unless the packet is a Version Negotiation packet or
an extension is used that modifies the usage of this bit. If the bit is set to 1, it enables
endpoints to easily demultiplex with other UDP-encapsulated protocols.

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