Unhosted Adventures episode about remotestorage, please proofread

[michielbdejong]

please proofread! :)

https://unhosted.org/adventures/7/Adding-remote-storage-to-unhosted-web-apps.html

[nilclass]

• in first paragraph, the first mention of "CORS headers" should link somewhere
• in second paragraph, first line after "... is divided up into modules, one for each type of data" I would add "(documents, music, pictures, ...)"
• maybe add image of the widget (e.g. the one from remotestorage.io/integrate) to second paragraph for illustration
• if unhosted-time-tracker and todomvc work well together now (which I believe they do, see shybyte/unhosted-time-tracker#5, still needs testing in more browsers), that could be added as an example for two apps sharing data
• oh, and I wouldn't call the current apps "production-ready" just yet :)

[michielbdejong]

thanks! updated.