Suggestions for copy in PPP widget
jbranchaud opened this issue · 5 comments
Here is what the PPP widget (widget probably isn't the right word) looks like as implemented in #907.
During a discussion yesterday between @laurosilvacom, @garrettdimon, and myself, we wondered if there are any adjustments to make to this copy.
In particular, we wanted to make sure that it is clear that the PPP coupon is only available for single-seat subscriptions.
- Is there something more we want to say in the widget to make that clear?
- Should we communicate that in a more reactive way? E.g. the user applies a PPP coupon, then tries to up the seat count, and then we display an info message making sure they know the coupon isn't applicable to multiple seats.
The goal is to not (negatively) surprise the user as they are figuring out the right pricing for their situation.
How about something like the following. I tried to consolidate it, but in some ways, given the restrictions, I think having a more scannable list will be more likely that people actually read it.
It looks like you're in Brazil. To support global learning, we'd like to offer you a discount of X% to account for differences in currencies. Please note the following restrictions associated with choosing to apply the discount.
1. You will only be able to view content from within Brazil.
2. Downloads and bonuses are not included.
3. The discount is only valid for single-user accounts and does not apply to team accounts.
If that sounds good, you can apply the discount below before continuing.
I also tried to simplify the language since it's possible (likely) that English isn't their first language.
Garrett's copy is on point!
Re-reading it, I don't love "You will only be able to view content from within Brazil."
That could mean, you can only view content that was created in Brazil (not what we're saying) or you can only view content while you're physically in Brazil.
Maybe "You will only be able to view the content while browsing from Brazil."