webRunes/WRIO-InternetOS

The Alternative Extract proofread

Closed this issue 7 years ago · 4 comments

AlexeyAnshakov commented 7 years ago

Please proofread https://alternative.webrunes.org/img/extract.png

Deleted user commented 7 years ago

Working on this as a PDF with comments with edits

Deleted user commented 7 years ago

extract edit.pdf
Hi Alexey

Please see edit attached.

Some things I have already edited in other content -- thanks!

AlexeyAnshakov commented 7 years ago

Thanks, we'll update it soon enough.

AlexeyAnshakov commented 7 years ago

Updated. Not all changes were implemented.