quicwg/quic-v2

AD reveiw : Minor editorial comments

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    QUIC {{QUIC}} has numerous extension points, including the version number
    ) it is better that we call it QUIC version 1 not just QUIC. As later it is referred as QUIC version 1.

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    Note that version 2 meets that document's definition of a compatible version
    ) I would add reference to VN draft instead of calling it "that document"

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    different version in the subsequent Initial that contains the Retry token. The
    ) i would add "packet" after "Initial" just to be clear, as we have now a initial version in VN draft.