AD reveiw : Minor editorial comments
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zaheduzzaman commented
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martinduke commented
Thanks, fixed here
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…On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 7:24 AM Zaheduzzaman Sarker < ***@***.***> wrote:
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here (
https://github.com/quicwg/quic-v2/blob/3d2af981f8ed63b6256aadb2fec122a2df469fc6/draft-ietf-quic-v2.md?plain=1#L155)
I would add reference to VN draft instead of calling it "that document"
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here (
https://github.com/quicwg/quic-v2/blob/3d2af981f8ed63b6256aadb2fec122a2df469fc6/draft-ietf-quic-v2.md?plain=1#L169)
i would add "packet" after "Initial" just to be clear, as we have now a
initial version in VN draft.
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